Find Text Evidence
Writing a Narrative: Legend — Days 4–5 of 15
- Identify and gather text evidence about the elements of legends from an encyclopedia article
- Use the S, C, P marking strategy to organize evidence by Setting, Character, and Plot
- Connect evidence gathered from the source text to their own legend about a palace guard
- Record specific details that will inform the planning of their narrative writing
Specific facts, details, or quotes taken directly from a text that support an idea or answer a question.
Special features or qualities that make something what it is. Characteristics help us describe and identify things.
Far beyond what is normal or ordinary — remarkable, amazing, or exceptional. NOT the same as superhuman or magical.
The original text you read and gather information from. A source text is where your evidence comes from.
A system for labeling important details in a text using letters or symbols. Our strategy uses S, C, and P.
🔎 We're Becoming RESEARCHERS!
Yesterday you read about legends. Today you're going to search that encyclopedia article for specific evidence — details you'll use in YOUR legend about a palace guard who recovers a king's stolen crown.
This is Step 3: Find Text Evidence in our writing process. Think of it like being a detective — you're hunting for clues in the encyclopedia that will help you write an amazing legend! (p. 70)
Studied the mentor text "The Best Gator Wrestler of 1804" and learned what legends are.
Unpacked our assignment: Write a legend about a palace guard who recovers a king's stolen crown.
Read the encyclopedia article on legends (pp. 72–75) to understand what makes a legend.
Step 3: Find Text Evidence — Go back into the encyclopedia to GATHER EVIDENCE for your own legend.
Definition
Text evidence = specific facts, details, quotes, or examples taken directly from a text.
When someone asks "How do you know that?" — evidence is your proof. It comes straight from the text.
When you plan YOUR legend, evidence from the encyclopedia will give you real details to build your story.
If I write "Legends have heroes," is that text evidence?
👍 Thumbs up if YES 👎 Thumbs down if NO
Text evidence needs to be specific. "Legends have heroes" is too vague. Better evidence: "The main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues, not superhuman powers." (p. 73) — That's a direct detail from the text!
As you reread the encyclopedia article (pp. 72–75), you'll mark details that explain the elements of legends. Use S for setting, C for characters, and P for plot.
Where and when does a legend take place? Look for details about real places and historical time periods.
Who is the hero or heroine? What extraordinary skills and virtues do they have? What makes them special?
What problem or challenge does the hero face? How do they solve it? What sequence of events unfolds?
Use the S, C, P marking strategy when rereading:
• S = Setting (where and when)
• C = Characters (who and what makes them special)
• P = Plot (what problem, how solved)
We'll search the encyclopedia article for evidence in four categories. Each one will help you plan a different part of your palace guard legend.
What ARE legends? What makes them different?
Where and when do legends take place?
What are legendary heroes like?
What challenges do heroes face and how do they win?
Let me show you how I search for evidence. I'm rereading the encyclopedia Introduction (p. 72) and looking for details about what legends ARE.
Evidence I Found (p. 72)
"Legends are stories that many people believe to be true, even though scholars cannot prove they are. Legends often (but not always) center on real-life heroes."
"This tells me that a legend is based on something real — but it might be exaggerated. People believe it's true even if scholars can't prove it. That's a key characteristic! I'll mark this."
"The facts about real-life people and events are enhanced with many fictional details. The details often are so convincing that many people accept every part of a legend as truth."
"All legends are narratives, which means they have a beginning, middle, and end, and tell a story in time order."
"So legends mix real facts with fictional details, and they're told like a story with a clear beginning, middle, and end. These are important characteristics I need for my own legend!"
The encyclopedia lists three special features that all legends share. Let me find them:
"Their plots may have fantasy elements, such as magical weapons and imaginary beasts, the stories happen in real places, not a fantasy world." (p. 73)
"Legends are linked to a particular time in history as well as a particular place." (p. 73)
"The main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues, not superhuman powers." (p. 73)
Based on what we've found so far, what are the most important characteristics of a legend? How is a legend DIFFERENT from a fairy tale or a myth?
Sentence starter: "A legend is different from a fairy tale because ___"
"Fairy tales are clearly make believe. They take place in fantasy worlds and describe impossible characters and events. By contrast, the heroes in legends often do amazing things, but they use real human skills, not magical ones."
Now I'm searching for evidence about settings. Remember — legends happen in real places during real time periods. Let me find examples:
"The legend of King Arthur is usually set in England during the fifth century." (p. 73)
Set in what is now the country of Nigeria — a 16th century African warrior-princess (p. 74)
Set in Switzerland during a harsh rule in the 14th century (p. 75)
"Every legend setting is a real place in a real time period. For MY legend, the palace guard lives in a real kingdom — maybe based on a real place in history, just like these examples!"
Could a legend be set in outer space on a made-up planet?
👍 Yes 👎 No
No! Legends happen in real places during real time periods. A made-up planet would make it science fiction or a myth. That's one key difference between legends and other stories.
Now I'm looking for evidence about characters — specifically, what makes legendary heroes special. Remember: extraordinary, but NOT superhuman!
Key Rule from p. 73
"The main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues, not superhuman powers."
"This is SO important! Legendary heroes are amazing — but they're still human. They don't fly or shoot lasers. They have real skills like strength, bravery, and cleverness that are just pushed to the extreme."
"King Arthur may have been a real-life human hero. Some experts believe his legend is based on a real British ruler who defended his kingdom from invaders and helped build a nation." (p. 74)
Skills: Leadership, defending his kingdom, building a nation
Virtues: Bravery, duty — "They are extraordinary people, but they are just people."
"The legend of Queen Amina of Zaria is based on a real 16th century African warrior-princess." (p. 74)
"This foretold her future as a skilled and brave warrior who would build a nation in what is now the country of Nigeria."
Skills: Warrior skills, nation-building
Virtues: Bravery, strength, leadership
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"An incredibly strong man who died while competing with a steam-powered machine to carve out a railroad tunnel." (p. 75) — Extraordinary strength, but still human
"A brave patriot who helped free Switzerland from a harsh rule in the 14th century." (p. 75) — Known for shooting an apple off his son's head with a crossbow. Extraordinary accuracy and courage
"Hua Mulan disguised herself as a boy so she could be a warrior in order to honor her family and save her country." (p. 75) — Extraordinary courage and sacrifice
What's the difference between extraordinary and superhuman? Can you think of an example of each?
Sentence starter: "Extraordinary means ___, but superhuman means ___. For example, ___"
Extraordinary = possible but unusual ("more than" ordinary). Superhuman = impossible for any human ("beyond human"). John Henry was incredibly strong — but he didn't have super strength like Superman. He was still a real person who pushed his body to the limit.
Now I'm searching for plot evidence — what problems do heroes face, and how do they solve them?
Challenge: Invaders threatening the kingdom
Solution: Defended his kingdom, helped build a nation (p. 74)
Challenge: A steam-powered machine that could replace human workers
Solution: Competed against the machine using his incredible strength (p. 75)
Challenge: Harsh foreign rule over Switzerland
Solution: Helped free his country; proved his skill by shooting an apple off his son's head (p. 75)
Key Evidence (p. 75)
"Whether new or ancient, all legends share timeless themes that reflect our values, beliefs, and ideals. A legendary hero is, at heart, a lot like us: someone who battles the odds and strives to do the right thing."
"This is huge for our plot evidence! Every legend has a theme — a lesson about values. The hero isn't just fighting a problem, they're showing us something important about courage, honesty, or doing the right thing. My palace guard legend needs that too!"
Heroes face an impossible challenge → use their extraordinary abilities → the outcome teaches a timeless lesson about human values
I showed you HOW to search the encyclopedia for evidence in all four categories: Characteristics, Settings, Heroes, and Plot.
Now let's practice TOGETHER. We'll look at how Olive finds and marks her evidence — then you'll try it with a partner!
Olive is working on the same assignment as you! She's rereading the encyclopedia and using the S, C, P marking strategy. Let's follow her thinking.
Olive's Think Aloud (p. 70)
"This sentence tells me that the main character in a legend is also a real-life hero, but not always. I'll underline this sentence and mark it with a C. I know from my assignment that my hero won't be a real-life person, but I will give her the key characteristics of a real-life person."
"The text says that details about real people and events are enhanced. That's cool! I need to think about descriptions and details about my characters and events. They still have to be believable, though. I'll underline this part and mark it with both a C and a P."
"These details make me think that my legend needs a clear, sensible sequence of events. I'll need to make sure that each of my events follows naturally from earlier events, like in real life. I'll mark these details with a P."
Olive doesn't just find evidence — she thinks about how she'll USE it in her own legend. That's the goal! You're not just collecting facts. You're collecting building materials for YOUR story.
1. Reread the source text slowly
2. Look for ONE category at a time
3. Mark with S, C, or P
4. Think: "How will I USE this in my legend?"
Four categories: Characteristics of legends, Settings, Heroes/Heroines, How Problems Are Solved
Read this excerpt from the encyclopedia. Use the S, C, P marking strategy to find evidence. What details can you mark?
"...First, although their plots may have fantasy elements, such as magical weapons and imaginary beasts, the stories happen in real places, not a fantasy world. Even if the legend is said to have happened long ago, those who hear the story today can still visit the place where it occurred. Second, legends are linked to a particular time in history as well as a particular place.... And third, the main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues, not superhuman powers."
— from "Legends" encyclopedia, p. 73
"...First, although their plots may have fantasy elements, such as magical weapons and imaginary beasts, the stories happen in real places, not a fantasy world. Even if the legend is said to have happened long ago, those who hear the story today can still visit the place where it occurred. Second, legends are linked to a particular time in history as well as a particular place.... And third, the main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues, not superhuman powers."
💡 Click each button to highlight the Setting, Character, and Plot evidence in this passage!
What does this excerpt from p. 73 teach you about the setting of legends? How will this help you plan the setting of YOUR legend?
Sentence starter: "I learned that legend settings are ___, so for my palace guard legend I could ___"
"I know from my assignment that my guard lives in a kingdom with a castle. I'll use what I know from history to set my legend in a real place and time." (p. 71)
The excerpt told us that legendary characters have extraordinary skills and virtues, but NOT superhuman powers. Let's think about what this means for YOUR palace guard:
Your palace guard could be incredibly clever, amazingly quick-thinking, the most resourceful person in the kingdom, unusually brave and determined
Your palace guard should NOT have laser eyes, the ability to fly, magical powers, or the ability to become invisible
"What is the difference between extraordinary and superhuman?" — Extraordinary means that it's possible but unusual; superhuman means that no human would be able to do such a thing.
True or False: When collecting text evidence, you should just underline everything that looks interesting.
👍 True 👎 False
False! You should read for one category at a time and mark with the correct letter — S, C, or P. Just underlining everything doesn't help you organize your thinking. Be a focused detective! (p. 70)
We searched the encyclopedia together and found evidence for all four categories. We practiced the S, C, P marking strategy.
You'll reread the entire encyclopedia article (pp. 72–75) on your own and collect at least 3 pieces of evidence in EACH category.
- Open your source text to page 72.
- Read for S — Setting evidence first. Mark at least 3 details about WHERE and WHEN legends take place.
- Go back to page 72 and read for C — Character evidence. Mark at least 3 details about HEROES and their qualities.
- Go back one more time for P — Plot evidence. Mark at least 3 details about PROBLEMS and HOW heroes solve them.
- Write your evidence in your notebook using the chart on the next slide.
Where? When? What real places? What time period?
1. _______________
2. _______________
3. _______________
Who is the hero? What skills? What virtues?
1. _______________
2. _______________
3. _______________
What problem? How solved? What theme or lesson?
1. _______________
2. _______________
3. _______________
Don't try to find everything at once! Read through once for S, once for C, once for P. (p. 70)
For Characters, look for words like: brave, clever, strong, skilled, virtues. For Plot, look for: challenge, compete, defeat, overcome. (p. 70)
After you mark evidence, ask yourself: "How will I USE this in my palace guard legend?" That's the whole point!
Always note WHERE you found the evidence — "p. 73" or "paragraph 4" — so you can find it again later!
Today you'll continue where you left off yesterday. By the end of today, you should have a complete evidence chart with at least 3 entries in each category.
Day 5 Checklist
Share your BEST piece of evidence with your partner. Tell them: What did you find? What category is it? How will you use it in your palace guard legend?
Sentence starter: "My best piece of evidence is from page ___. It says ___, and I'll use this in my legend by ___"
The encyclopedia has illustrations of each legendary hero. These pictures give you clues about setting, character, and plot!
Shows him as a ruler during the Middle Ages — a castle and his crown, armor, and heraldic crest show him as a ruler. This is evidence for S and C! (p. 75)
Shows his incredible strength as he competes with the machine — evidence for C (strength) and P (the competition)!
Your Assignment
"Write a legend about a palace guard who recovers a king's stolen crown. The guard, known for cleverness and quick thinking, must retrieve the crown from the king's enemy, who has hidden it in his own castle." (p. 67)
Every piece of evidence you've collected will help you plan this legend. Let's connect the dots...
Legends happen in real places during real time periods:
• England in the 5th century
• Nigeria in the 16th century
• Switzerland in the 14th century
• America (John Henry)
Your legend takes place in a real kingdom. Think about:
• What real kingdom or time period will you choose?
• What does the castle look like? The surrounding land?
• What was life like for guards and royalty?
• Where does the enemy hide the stolen crown?
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Legendary heroes have:
• Extraordinary skills (not superhuman)
• Virtues like bravery, courage, honor
• Real human qualities and flaws
• They struggle and face real danger
Your palace guard could have:
• Extraordinary cleverness and quick thinking
• Bravery in the face of a dangerous enemy
• A brilliant plan to outsmart the enemy and recover the crown
• Real human worries — is he or she nervous? Outnumbered?
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In legends, heroes:
• Face impossible challenges
• Use their extraordinary skills to overcome
• The outcome teaches a lesson
• Events follow a natural sequence
• The story has a timeless theme
Your stolen crown plot could include:
• The problem: the king's enemy has stolen the crown and hidden it
• The plan: how does the guard figure out where it is?
• How the guard uses cleverness and quick thinking to succeed
• A theme: courage, loyalty, doing the right thing
• A clear beginning, middle, and end
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My Hero (Palace Guard): Extraordinary at ___ — [cleverness? quick thinking? bravery?]
My Plot: Problem = stolen crown, Plan = ___, Theme = ___
Raise your hand if you can answer ALL THREE:
1. What is the setting of your palace guard legend?
2. What extraordinary quality will your palace guard have?
3. What is the guard's plan to recover the stolen crown?
If you can answer all three — your evidence collection is working! If not, go back to the source text and keep searching.
What text evidence is and how to find it using the S, C, P marking strategy
Evidence about characteristics, settings, heroes, and plots from the "Legends" encyclopedia
Your evidence to your own palace guard legend — setting, hero, and plot ideas are forming!
You'll use this evidence to plan your legend — organizing your ideas into a beginning, middle, and end!
In the bottom of your notebook page, write one sentence explaining what you learned about finding text evidence for your legend.
What is text evidence? Give one example from the encyclopedia.
Text evidence = specific facts, details, or quotes from a text. Example: "The main characters in legends are people with extraordinary skills and virtues." (p. 73)
Name ONE piece of evidence from the encyclopedia that you'll use in your palace guard legend. What category is it? (S, C, or P)
Example: "Heroes use their extraordinary abilities to overcome challenges" — Category P (Plot). I'll use this because my palace guard will use extraordinary cleverness to outsmart the king's enemy and recover the crown.
Don't Rush Your Evidence!
The more detailed evidence you collect, the stronger your legend will be. Your evidence chart is the foundation for everything you'll write next.
"Whether new or ancient, all legends share timeless themes that reflect our values, beliefs, and ideals." — p. 75
Your palace guard legend will be part of that tradition. 👑