๐Ÿ’ช What Makes STRONG Evidence?

Not all details are created equal!
โฑ๏ธ Mini-Lesson: ~15 minutes
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๐Ÿค” The Problem

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When you read a source, you can't underline EVERYTHING.
So how do you pick the BEST details?

๐Ÿ‘Ž Weak vs. Strong ๐Ÿ‘

โŒ Weak Evidence

"Cheetahs are really fast."
Vague. How fast? Faster than what?
VS

โœ… Strong Evidence

"Cheetahs can reach speeds of 70 miles per hour."
Specific! A number you can USE in your essay.

๐Ÿ‘Ž Weak vs. Strong ๐Ÿ‘

โŒ Weak Evidence

"A lot of fish live in the sunlight zone."
"A lot" doesn't mean anything specific.
VS

โœ… Strong Evidence

"90% of all ocean life lives in the sunlight zone."
A real statistic that proves your point!

๐Ÿ‘Ž Weak vs. Strong ๐Ÿ‘

โŒ Weak Evidence

"Old video games were different."
Different HOW? This tells us nothing.
VS

โœ… Strong Evidence

"Pong used only 2 colors, while modern games use over 16 million."
Specific comparison with real numbers!

๐ŸŒŸ 4 Types of STRONG Evidence

๐Ÿ”ข Numbers & Statistics

Percentages, measurements, dates, amounts

"70 mph" โ€ข "90% of ocean life" โ€ข "1972"

๐Ÿ“Œ Specific Examples

Named animals, games, places, people

"The anglerfish..." โ€ข "Pac-Man..." โ€ข "The walrus..."

๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ Expert Quotes

What scientists or experts said

"Dr. Chen explains..." โ€ข "Scientists discovered..."

โ†”๏ธ Comparisons

Before/after, more/less, unlike...

"Unlike other cats, cheetahs..." โ€ข "From 2 colors to millions..."

โœ… The "Could I Use This?" Test

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Before you underline, ask yourself:
"Could I put this exact detail in MY essay?"
If YES โžœ Underline it! ๐Ÿ“
If NO โžœ Keep reading for something better ๐Ÿ‘€

๐ŸŽฏ Which Would YOU Underline?

A "Owls have good eyes that help them see."
B "Owls' huge eyes take up most of their skull and can see in almost complete darkness."
๐Ÿค” Think... Which has more SPECIFIC details?

โœ… Option B Wins!

๐Ÿ† "Owls' huge eyes take up most of their skull and can see in almost complete darkness."
Why it's stronger:
โœ“ "Huge" and "take up most of their skull" = specific size
โœ“ "Almost complete darkness" = specific ability
โœ“ You could actually USE this in your essay!

๐ŸŽฏ Which Would YOU Underline?

A "The midnight zone starts at 1,000 meters deep, where pressure is 1,000 times stronger than at the surface."
B "The midnight zone is really dark and deep."
๐ŸŒŠ Ocean Zones exampleโ€”which has SPECIFIC details?

โœ… Option A Wins!

๐Ÿ† "The midnight zone starts at 1,000 meters deep, where pressure is 1,000 times stronger than at the surface."
Why it's stronger:
โœ“ "1,000 meters" = specific depth (a NUMBER!)
โœ“ "1,000 times stronger" = specific comparison
โœ“ "Really dark and deep" tells us NOTHING specific!

๐ŸŽฏ Which Would YOU Underline?

A "Arcade games were really popular back in the old days."
B "In 1982, arcade games earned $8 billionโ€”more than movies and music combined."
๐ŸŽฎ Video Games exampleโ€”which could you USE in an essay?

โœ… Option B Wins!

๐Ÿ† "In 1982, arcade games earned $8 billionโ€”more than movies and music combined."
Why it's stronger:
โœ“ "1982" = specific year
โœ“ "$8 billion" = specific number
โœ“ "More than movies and music" = powerful comparison!

๐ŸŽฏ One More! Which Would YOU Underline?

A "The Arctic fox changes from brown to white in winter, becoming nearly invisible against the snow."
B "Some animals can change colors to hide from enemies."
๐ŸฆŽ Animal Adaptations exampleโ€”which is MORE specific?

โœ… Option A Wins!

๐Ÿ† "The Arctic fox changes from brown to white in winter, becoming nearly invisible against the snow."
Why it's stronger:
โœ“ "Arctic fox" = specific animal name
โœ“ "Brown to white" = specific colors
โœ“ "In winter" and "against the snow" = specific details!

๐Ÿ“ When You Annotate Today...

๐Ÿ”ข Underline numbers and statistics
๐Ÿ“Œ Underline specific examples (names, places)
๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ Underline expert quotes
๐Ÿšซ SKIP vague statements like "really good" or "very big"
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Remember...

Strong evidence has SPECIFIC DETAILS you can use in your writing!
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