✍️ Rewording Our Evidence

Energy Sources Writing Project

🔄 Quick Reminder: Why We Reword

We put evidence in our own words to: • Show we understand what we read
• Avoid copying the author word-for-word
• Make our writing sound like us
• Explain ideas clearly to our readers
Remember: Explain it like you're telling a friend! Think about what it means, not just what words to swap.

Quick Practice #1

📖 From the Text:
"The dam stores lots of water behind it in the reservoir."
💭 Think: How would you say this to a friend? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"A dam holds back a huge amount of water in a lake called a reservoir."

Quick Practice #2

📖 From the Text:
"Wind turbines produce large quantities of clean energy."
💭 Think: How would you say this to a friend? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Wind turbines make a lot of energy without creating pollution."

🎯 Now: Your Article Details

You've found details in your articles marked with B (Benefits), P (Problems), and W (How it Works).

Now let's practice rewording those actual details!

Remember your strategy: Read it → Think about what it means → Explain it like telling a friend → Write it in your own words

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROW - How It Works

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"Gravity causes the water to fall through the penstock inside the dam."
💭 Think: What makes the water move? Where does it go? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"The force of gravity pulls the water down through a tunnel called a penstock in the dam."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROW - How It Works

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"The water turns a turbine propeller."
💭 Think: What does the water do to the turbine? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"The rushing water spins the blades of a turbine propeller."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROW - How It Works

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"The propeller moves the shaft connected to the generator. The generator makes electricity."
💭 Think: What happens after the propeller moves? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"When the propeller spins, it turns a shaft that makes a generator create electricity."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROB - Benefit

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"It's the cheapest way to generate electricity today."
💭 Think: Why is this good? What does "cheapest" mean? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Hydroelectric power costs less money to make than other types of electricity."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROB - Benefit

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"Once a dam has been built and the equipment is in place, the source of energy, flowing water, is free."
💭 Think: Why is this a benefit? What makes it free? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"After you build a dam, you don't have to pay for the water that makes the electricity."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROB - Benefit

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"Power is readily available. A hydroelectric plant can provide electricity on demand."
💭 Think: What does "readily available" and "on demand" mean? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Hydroelectric plants can make electricity whenever people need it."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROP - Problem

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"Damming rivers can destroy or disrupt animal migration patterns."
💭 Think: What problem does the dam cause for animals? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Building dams can mess up the paths that animals use to travel from place to place."

Practice: Hydroelectric HYDROP - Problem

📖 From "Hydroelectric Power":
"Hydropower plants can cause low levels of oxygen in the water, which is harmful to river plants and animals."
💭 Think: What's the problem and why is it bad? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Dams can make the water have less oxygen, which can hurt the plants and animals living in the river."

Practice: Wind Power WINDW - How It Works

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Blades are mounted around a turning part called a rotor, which is connected to a part called a shaft."
💭 Think: What are the parts and how are they connected? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"The blades attach to a spinning part called a rotor, and the rotor connects to a shaft."

Practice: Wind Power WINDW - How It Works

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"When the blades catch the wind, it turns them. This spins the shaft."
💭 Think: What causes what to happen? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"The wind pushes on the blades and makes them spin, which makes the shaft turn."

Practice: Wind Power WINDW - How It Works

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"The shaft is connected to a generator, which turns the energy from the movement of the shaft into current electricity."
💭 Think: What does the generator do? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"When the shaft spins, it turns a generator that changes the spinning motion into electricity."

Practice: Wind Power WINDB - Benefit

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind energy is also renewable, which means it can't be used up."
💭 Think: Why is renewable good? What does it mean? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Wind energy won't run out because the wind will always keep blowing."

Practice: Wind Power WINDB - Benefit

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind energy doesn't create pollution or greenhouse gases that can cause climate change."
💭 Think: What does wind energy NOT do? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Making electricity from wind doesn't pollute the air or create gases that harm the Earth's climate."

Practice: Wind Power WINDB - Benefit

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind energy uses no water for cooling. Switching to wind power can provide water for more than a million people to consume."
💭 Think: How does saving water help people? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Wind turbines don't need water to work, so that water can be used by people for drinking instead."

Practice: Wind Power WINDP - Problem

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind turbines produce noise pollution. People who live close to wind farms often complain about the noise the turbines make as they turn."
💭 Think: What's the problem with the noise? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Wind turbines are loud when they spin, and people living nearby don't like all the noise."

Practice: Wind Power WINDP - Problem

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind farms produce lots of clean energy. But wind farms produce noise, kill some birds and bats, and often must be located far from cities."
💭 Think: What are the different problems mentioned? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"Wind farms can be noisy, hurt birds and bats, and usually have to be built far away from where people live."

Practice: Wind Power WINDP - Problem

📖 From "Capturing the Wind":
"Wind isn't constant; it doesn't always blow, and sometimes it blows harder than others. Because of this, wind can't be counted on as our main source of energy."
💭 Think: Why is wind unreliable? 🗣️ Turn and Talk: Share your reworded version.
✨ Possible Answer:
"The wind doesn't blow all the time or at the same speed, so we can't depend only on wind for our electricity."

🎯 Ready to Complete Your Chart!

You've got this! 💪 Remember: Same meaning, different words. Explain it like you're helping a friend understand!